You might have started with a jumble of sounds as your first try, but when listeners hear your loop, they would never figure. The begining is simple and effective. It doesn't over power the listener. The slower pase, quieter sounds, and simplicity work wonders. You eased your listeners in with your begining, spun in a little dance beat, and allowed them to have a lesurely listen.
It was simple and to the point. Your fills could have been a little more exciting, but they served their purpose. I like that you used the side stick that was in the fill as the main idea for your second pattern.
You might have started with a jumble of sounds as your first try, but when listeners hear your loop, they would never figure. The begining is simple and effective. It doesn't over power the listener. The slower pase, quieter sounds, and simplicity work wonders. You eased your listeners in with your begining, spun in a little dance beat, and allowed them to have a lesurely listen.
ReplyDeleteIt was simple and to the point. Your fills could have been a little more exciting, but they served their purpose. I like that you used the side stick that was in the fill as the main idea for your second pattern.
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